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Starve
keep on going
feel cold all the time
it will pay off
and I will shine
feel them whispering
all around you
but they don't know
the truth about you
you smell the food
on the table
but you can do it
you are unable
unstable
unstoppable



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raindance72This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 7:16 pm:

There's a viewpoint issue in here (I, then to you) that is a little confusing; for me, at least. But the piece is very nice overall and I just had to stop to tell you that!

I love the last three lines - "unable, unstable, unstoppable". Nice work! :)

 
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