Dying for tHiN

October 29, 2011
Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Starve
keep on going
feel cold all the time
it will pay off
and I will shine
feel them whispering
all around you
but they don't know
the truth about you
you smell the food
on the table
but you can do it
you are unable
unstable
unstoppable





Join the Discussion

This article has 1 comment. Post your own now!

raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 7:16 pm

There's a viewpoint issue in here (I, then to you) that is a little confusing; for me, at least. But the piece is very nice overall and I just had to stop to tell you that!

I love the last three lines - "unable, unstable, unstoppable". Nice work! :)

 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback