Darkness Hides

October 23, 2011
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Surrounded by light
I'm living a lie
Darkness is safer
I'll never say goodbye
My home is a hole
You've heard of it,
It's black.
Come to the darkness
You'll never go back.
My safety, My haven
I'll never leave.
I'm scared of the light,
Cuz you'll see my heart
On my sleeve.

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DarkOne411 said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 3:29 pm

I agree it is beautiful. You describe me perfectly.


DrowningInTheBrooke replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 5:42 pm
we must be alike... :)
Im--NOT--Rayyn said...
Nov. 16, 2011 at 7:23 am
I like how in the end you explain why you're afraid, and I like how you described it too. I suggest that instead of "Cuz" you use the word "'Cause" or even "because" (though "because" wouldn't really fit), only for the sake of proper grammar.
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 4:55 pm
thank you, yes I've had the same concern. i thought that if were to say cause, the reader would read it as "cause and effect" not "because"
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