Darkness Hides

October 23, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?


Surrounded by light
I'm living a lie
Darkness is safer
I'll never say goodbye
My home is a hole
You've heard of it,
It's black.
Come to the darkness
You'll never go back.
My safety, My haven
I'll never leave.
I'm scared of the light,
Cuz you'll see my heart
On my sleeve.



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on Dec. 12 2011 at 5:42 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

we must be alike... :)

on Dec. 12 2011 at 3:29 pm
ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Coute que coute(Cost What It May)

I agree it is beautiful. You describe me perfectly.

 


on Nov. 21 2011 at 4:55 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thank you, yes I've had the same concern. i thought that if were to say cause, the reader would read it as "cause and effect" not "because"

on Nov. 16 2011 at 7:23 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I like how in the end you explain why you're afraid, and I like how you described it too. I suggest that instead of "Cuz" you use the word "'Cause" or even "because" (though "because" wouldn't really fit), only for the sake of proper grammar.


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