I'm Going Insane

Your driving me insane.
Making me do the extreme.
There's no word to compare,
what your doing to me.
The only word that comes to mind,
is insanity.
Your vulgar profanity,
and crude words,
is what drives me so insane.
Your just to vain,
for your own good.
To profane,
and to stuck in your own domain.
So break free and escape,
and finally explain,
why you've been driving me insane.
When you do,
I'll be waiting,
stuck here in my insanity,
the insanity,
that makes you so sane.





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AmandaElizabeth said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 4:27 pm
Gahhhh !!!!! BREANNA !!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
frissy7 said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 3:56 pm
hey u go to my school its me breanna hahhaaaaa i love it
 
karolyn23 said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 4:47 pm
thats really good, hope you go far!! love that your my neighbor!!
 
carlya14 said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 3:37 pm
Really great :) loved all the emotion
 
Metaphor said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 8:20 pm
Lovely diction.
 
AmandaElizabeth replied...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 3:28 pm
Thanks. :)
 
cayaTW This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 7:52 pm

Wow, i got lost for a moment there, but i found my way back.  i liked how it showed a lot of emotion. Good job.

 

 
AmandaElizabeth replied...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 3:29 pm
Thank you, I try. lol :)
 
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