On Top of the World With You

October 9, 2011
By mdamico1315 BRONZE, Mattydale, New York
mdamico1315 BRONZE, Mattydale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
don't tell me sky is the limit when there are foot prints on the moon


it seems like just yesterday
that I never thought I'd feel this way
you and I together
when did I think about it, never
things between us, yeah they happened real quick
but its definitely something special, the way you and I click
with anyone else, I wouldn’t rather be
all I wanna see is just you and me
everything you do, it all makes me smile
and I'd be lying if I said I didn’t want you around for a while
my favorite thing about you, is definitely those eyes
and I must have won a game because I consider you my prize
now lets calm things down, lets take them slow
I'd hold you for hours just so you know
that I love you
I really do
and I just hope that you love me too
these are all true, these words coming from me
and it didn't take long, no not for me to see
yeah sometimes we fight, we aren't always our best
but ever think that maybe, it could just be a test
maybe were supposed to last, obviously I don't know
but if it was my choice, neither of us would be solo
I don't want to say goodbye, just a see you soon
because what you do to me feels like I'm higher than the moon
I hope this shows you, just how much I care
because I don't want to be just friends, I want us as a pair

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this is my current girlfriend, it is entirely about her and our relationship. It was my way of showing her the way I feel about her and just how much I care. But it can mean so much more than that. There will always be things that draw you to somebody you care about and have feelings for. On the other hand, fights will always happen but I feel that, to an extent, fighting makes a relationship stronger. Also, you never want to let go of that one special person either. In my poem I talk about the fighting being a test and maybe being supposed to last, but not knowing for sure and what I mean by those is god knows what is in store for your relationship and you have to have faith in him. In my opinion these concepts I portray pertain to everything from crushes, to teenage relationships, to marriage and even just a friendship. That is I want taken away from my poem.

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