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The Path

October 11, 2011
By soulwriter101 BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
soulwriter101 BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
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A voice guides me
To the steps and
Heartbeat of the strife of my life

The voice is guile
It knows before
I smile, it’s
Knowledge is vast
And tall it knows
Before I fall into the
Rose

The flames burn
Within me but
It can be seen well
Beyond me
And
This dream whispering
Its smiles into others
All can be seen

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem in high school and it was originally about my dreams guiding me but other daily problems became mixed in.

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on Oct. 13 2011 at 6:22 pm
soulwriter101 BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
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Thanks I'm glad someone liked it :]

on Oct. 13 2011 at 5:41 pm
FangPoet DIAMOND, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I am yours as long as you are mine."

"Teenagers are in the forest of bad ideas an hormones."

"Your everything i want but nothing i need."
"I hate you so much ... i love you".

"Its the ugliest cute thing ever"!

"Everything is cute in its own way

In love the paradox occurs that two beings become one and yet remain two. - Erich Fromm

Hmm reminded me of a riddle i liked it.