What I have become.

October 11, 2011
I've disarmed my gun and shattered my sword.
Lost my anger and painted my war.
I've learned to love and how to forgive.
But lost myself in the torn pieces within.
The tears I cry, the blood I've lost, every single thing I've thought, just a token of my regret.
The regret I hold,
hold within my aching heart.
It stays inside, like a shadow,
a shadow beneath my soul.
It conquers my faith, my strength, and slowly my mind then my soul.
I am nothing but the darkness it's made and left behind.
but this choice to stay,
is a choice of mine.

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Vadda said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 7:39 pm
I really like the mood and depth in this :)
FangPoet said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 5:33 pm
Wow the depth.
trapped_in_words said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 4:23 pm
very nice i must say :)
daniblovee said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 12:58 pm
i can relate.. this is very well written, good job :)
sbarton123 said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 11:15 am
This is wow. It's so deep. I love it
Aiden said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 2:24 pm
this is amazing. i LOVE it!
MissUnderStood.2011 said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 12:38 pm
This is beautiful keep writing and stay strong :) loook at my pieces
Writer62 said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 11:13 am
That was amazing! Great writing.
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