Mumble-jumble of Thoughts

October 9, 2011
By denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
6 articles 15 photos 149 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind." -C.S. Lewis


When I had no journal,

Words spewed out of me.

No place to safely keep them,

They covered my notes and scrap papers,

Littered my mind,

And left their path of destruction through my thoughts.

Few are the moments

When I don't have my mind wrapped around

A word.

A thought.

Something later to be put into beautiful writing.

Those thoughts swim in my head,

Pound at the door.

Waiting inpatiently for their perfect moment to

Escape

Onto paper, of some sort.

Whenever they come out,

My pen starts moving

With a mind of its own!

One word follows another

Until a page is filled

Of my thoughts,
And you're free to read them.


The author's comments:
It's all true. Seriously. [Why I wrote it. ;)]

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on Jan. 28 2012 at 10:34 pm
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
6 articles 15 photos 149 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind." -C.S. Lewis

Thank you sooo much, you always have something nice to say about my work! I wrote this one in math class, as usual. When you're surrounded by crazy math braniacs with no sense of creativity...you kinda go CRAZY. xD

on Jan. 28 2012 at 10:30 pm
Whoa this is phenomenal and I can easily relate to this poem. I love your descriptions it breaths life into your work making the words dance within my mind lingering lightly before it soaks into me. I absolutely love your work!

on Jan. 28 2012 at 7:47 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Wow this is great! and I know the feeling! words 'litter' my brain everyday and poems are on the verge of my tongue! great description...im sure a lot of writers can relate!

tippy said...
on Oct. 12 2011 at 7:28 pm
That was the most bueatiful thing i've ever heard DD<3 AMAZING!!!!!


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