Do you miss me?

September 22, 2011
By yuka11 SILVER, Gilmer, Texas
yuka11 SILVER, Gilmer, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For my soul delighteth in the song of the heart; yea the song of the righteous is a prayer unto me, and it shall be answered with a blessing upon their heads." -Doctrine and Covenants 25:12


Dear Friend,
Do you miss me?
Do you see the same storms I do?
Do you struggle in your classes?
Do you make new friends every day?
Do you have someone to lean on?
Do you miss me?
Do you lay awake at night
Every night
And imagine me walking through the Door
Like I do?
Do you have heartaches
and tears?
Do you miss me?
Do you look up and see the
Celestial stars
And stand awed?
Do you laugh?
Do you have a thousand inside jokes?
Do you have wild joys
Every now and then?
Do you miss me?
I loved you.
I still do.
Do you love me?


The author's comments:
I have moved over twenty times, but this last time really hit me hard. That was my inspiration.

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yuka11 SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 4:41 pm
yuka11 SILVER, Gilmer, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For my soul delighteth in the song of the heart; yea the song of the righteous is a prayer unto me, and it shall be answered with a blessing upon their heads." -Doctrine and Covenants 25:12

Thankyou! You are the first person to comment on any of my work (besides my sister, anyway) and thankyou for saying WHY it was good :). Oh, you're welcome ;)

glimmer BRONZE said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 2:40 pm
glimmer BRONZE, Corvallis, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
My favorite quote is one by Albert Einstein-
"Learn from yesterday, Live for today, Hope for tomorrow."

Good work!

This sounds like it was really very personal, and that made it all the better!

My favorite line was the one about the celestial stars. the last four lines were also amazing- they were SO emotional! I will definitely be watching out for more of your pieces. Keep up the great work:)

P.S. I really apreciated that you commented on my piece "the sunset"- that was really nice:)





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