when you left

October 3, 2011
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
love comes and goes,
just like the watter flows


When you left,
You took my heart with you,
Never to return,
Not a single word,
Besides I'm sorry,
I hoped you were just joking,
Then I realized you weren't,
And choked up on tears,
And all my deepest fears,
Came true,
I loved you,
You loved me,
When you left,
You took my heart with you,
Never to return,


The author's comments:
this is about my boyfriend moving away and me having to get over it

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on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:33 am
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
32 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
love comes and goes,
just like the watter flows

and he was my longest relation ship to

on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:26 am
Paradise_Lost BRONZE, Mountville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
But paradise is locked and bolted; we must make a journey around the world to see if the back door has, perhaps, been left open.

Swearing is the last refuge of the imaginitively bankrupt.

I like it! It's hard to go through that, I know.




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