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September 11, 2011
By Anonymous

Feeling nothing
Losing something
Knowing everything
That is part of me

Doing the fighting
Longing to know dying
Never ending sighing
That is part of me

Everlasting crying
Tiring of trying
Listening to the lying
That is part of me

Watching the departing
Sleeping through the sinking feeling
Growing
Deepening
The depressing emotions inside of me

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
I realize this piece isn't very good, and is beyond the point of being repetitive. I just wanted some critiques, but please keep in mind that this poem is fairly old. I can definitely write better than this.
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