His and Hers

September 14, 2011
By acirebaats BRONZE, Hays, Kansas
acirebaats BRONZE, Hays, Kansas
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She willing gives all her heart.
For all she knows has been torn apart.
Like a shadow that dances on the wind.
Her soul is free to float and bend.

He grudgingly bestows her request.
For pain and sorrow and unrest.
Like a shiver that runs down the spine.
His love was never hers to find.

She selfishly hides him away.
For fear of losing him someday.
Like a silence she closes him in.
Her passion confused with sin.

He regretfully undoes all he’s done.
For he’s not one to call when he comes.
Like a monster love must not be caged.
He’s imprisoned which causes him rage.

She sinisterly slinks off in the night,
For revenge and plots, and fight.
Like a small child denied a toy.
She softly whispers for the boy.

He clumsily falls into her trap.
For not all can resist a hard slap.
Like sorrow he cries out for help.
He screams yet no hears his yelp.

She crazily carries a knife.
For to her he is nothing but a life.
Like a stealthy predator after prey,
She comes to cause much dismay.

He blindly is taken into the night.
For he knows not of the girls plight.
Like a stone he falls to the earth
He is forever free from her curse.


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on Sep. 19 2011 at 2:32 pm
heatherbug DIAMOND, Elon, North Carolina
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this was really good! i enjoyed it. keep writing, please

on Sep. 18 2011 at 10:27 pm
acirebaats BRONZE, Hays, Kansas
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Thanks! I was worried that the rhyme scheme might be too predictable, but from what you said it isn't? 

on Sep. 18 2011 at 9:40 pm
toto1601 BRONZE, Springs Co., Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying.”
― Oscar Wilde

“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”
― Dr. Seuss

“It is better to remain silent at the risk of being thought a fool, than to talk and remove all doubt of it.”
― Maurice Switzer

wow it's amazing, it's so different it isn't like a normal boy girl poems. It breaks the ruled and i love it for that reason.

on Sep. 18 2011 at 8:29 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

That. Was. Amazing!!! The ending was such a shock! I was worried this would be one of those boring little boy meets girl love stories, when really it's anything but! Keep writing : ) By the way, if you could read some of my poems, that'd be great!

on Sep. 18 2011 at 4:24 pm
acirebaats BRONZE, Hays, Kansas
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Thanks! :) 

on Sep. 18 2011 at 11:04 am
softballchick2014 BRONZE, Cedarhill, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
reese's are the best thing, right next to saterday and sunday. "Only two things are infinite, theuniverse and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former." - Alber Einstein "cowardly dogs bark louest." - John Webster, The White Devil 1612

OMFG!!! that was awesome!

:)





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