Pain!

August 30, 2011
By IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
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It comes and goes like a storm,
Our body weakened by it's wrath,
No defence can stop it,
We just bare it out,
It ravages God's whisper,
And leaves you feeling cold,
But in the end it leaves some truth,
That will keep you warm.

Burn those shadows into dust and move on having learned.


The author's comments:
This song tackles the theme of pain and it's effect on us.

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on Sep. 17 2011 at 7:42 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This is so beautiful! Wonderful word choice and imagery! The last line is pure brilliance! Great poem!

on Sep. 17 2011 at 7:28 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

This is really wonderful! Love the word choice! :) Ha. I almost made the same mistake, about saying "defence" was spelled wrong, before I realized you're from Ireland :) Anyway, really great!

on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:32 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

oh! okay, I'm sorry!!! haha. it's so cool how teen writers from all around the world use this site!

on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:15 pm
IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Thanks everyone for all the comments, your feedback is amazing. Appreciate all the support!

on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:11 pm
IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Thanks for the comment :D In Europe defence is spelt with a "c" though and I'm from Ireland just to clear that up :P

AMJaeh DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:45 pm
AMJaeh DIAMOND, Gallatin, Tennessee
51 articles 80 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
you don't have to understand the language to know its Poetik written Muzyk~PoetikMuzyk
Not Everything is ours to keep, no matter how hard we had to fight for it~PoetikMuzyk
‎"The face of my enemy only frightens me when I see how much it resembles mine"
- Stanislaw J. Lec

a few neurons can make us all a morons dont you think?

very nice..liked the meaning

on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:43 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 353 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

Very good! I like the meaning, too. Defense is spelled like this though. Keep writing so that i can keep on reading! :)

on Sep. 16 2011 at 3:37 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

Hey... I realy like this! I love the meaning of it! Great job on this, and I cant wait to read more of your work!

on Sep. 16 2011 at 12:17 pm
IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Thanks for the comment :D

on Sep. 16 2011 at 11:57 am
LiveLoveMusic SILVER, Torrington, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"Dont be afraid for I am with you always."
Isaiah

I like it :) it gave me chills, keep writing!

on Sep. 16 2011 at 9:34 am
IrishWriter SILVER, Sdfddas, Other
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Thanks for the nice comment!

on Sep. 15 2011 at 11:49 am
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go"!

Great job, well written. I've read this one in the threads! :) 


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