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It comes and goes like a storm,
Our body weakened by it's wrath,
No defence can stop it,
We just bare it out,
It ravages God's whisper,
And leaves you feeling cold,
But in the end it leaves some truth,
That will keep you warm.

Burn those shadows into dust and move on having learned.



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SecretFlameThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 7:42 pm:
This is so beautiful! Wonderful word choice and imagery! The last line is pure brilliance! Great poem!
 
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JustAnotherOwl said...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 7:28 pm:
This is really wonderful! Love the word choice! :) Ha. I almost made the same mistake, about saying "defence" was spelled wrong, before I realized you're from Ireland :) Anyway, really great!
 
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IrishWriter said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:15 pm:
Thanks everyone for all the comments, your feedback is amazing. Appreciate all the support!
 
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PoetikMuzyk said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:45 pm:
very nice..liked the meaning
 
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thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:43 pm:
Very good! I like the meaning, too. Defense is spelled like this though. Keep writing so that i can keep on reading! :)
 
IrishWriter replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:11 pm :
Thanks for the comment :D In Europe defence is spelt with a "c" though and I'm from Ireland just to clear that up :P
 
thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:32 pm :
oh! okay, I'm sorry!!! haha. it's so cool how teen writers from all around the world use this site!
 
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Kev-Girl said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 3:37 pm:
Hey... I realy like this! I love the meaning of it! Great job on this, and I cant wait to read more of your work!
 
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unwrittenuntamed said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 11:57 am:
I like it :) it gave me chills, keep writing!
 
IrishWriter replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 12:17 pm :
Thanks for the comment :D
 
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Damara...C said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 11:49 am:
Great job, well written. I've read this one in the threads! :) 
 
IrishWriter replied...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:34 am :
Thanks for the nice comment!
 
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