Bloody Tears

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I bleed bloody tears
I scream bloody cries

I'm trapped inside a box
No one hears
no one sees
no one cares or fears for me
I'm fighting on my own
alone in this world of a billion people
how can it be so?
how can I be so alone?
that no one knows?
Isn't it obvious?
From my bloody tears that stain my pale stained face?
Apparently not for I'm still trapped inside a box





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Loki17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:26 pm
Great repetition!  I agree, this definitely screams at you.  
 
PerttlesAreMe said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:25 pm
I really like this :)
 
FutureSceneQueen said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 9:41 am
i understand this.  and it's very well-written, it sort of yells out to you.  nice job. 
 
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