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I’m writing on my legs to hide the scars
Sitting down I’m only watching cars
Yellow red blue green
Normalcy just makes me scream

What happened to my happy smile?
I’m fake happy now for a while
Waiting for my life to fade
All happiness is our charade

Flower petals
Ripped to shreds
Symbolizing
My regrets




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sunnyallday said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 6:02 pm:
There are only one or two teeny tiny errors, but I like the idea :) Except the transition from writing on legs to watching cars is kind of awkard? 
 
secrets_of_silence replied...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 8:40 pm :
yeah i guess it could be but it doesnt feel like it to me
 
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DestineeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:42 pm:
This is so sad. :( I like how the last stanza is shorter than the rest.
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:54 pm :
i wasnt sure about the last stanza. and it was funny becouse i actually wrote this on my arm while sitting on the front steps at church, waiting for my youth group to start
 
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Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:54 pm :
Wow. That's actually really interesting. :) 
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:56 pm :
it was funny becouse my friend gave me a jacket to wear couse he read it and thought our leader would dissaprove
 
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Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:57 pm :
Haha, as if there's anything to disapprove of. :)
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:58 pm :
i know! i was being honest!!
 
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casielynnxoxo said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 7:36 pm:
I like the message it sends, this is good. It flows nicely too.  Good job :)
 
miracle_of_hope replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 6:15 pm :
thanx   
 
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