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A Date With Nature

A single snowflake flutters to the ground
Its beauty untouched and unique
The heavy foliage muffles the sound
Distancing civilization... or so to speak

The enveloping mist around me swirls
As I look down to the moss beneath
Winds blow in delightful whirls
Forming a shrouding sheath

Coming through the silvery luminescence
Is something shining and bright
There is just a feeling of their presence
Something invisible to human sight

They are spirits of winters gone by
Of ancient secrets yet untold
One knows not what mysteries
Their brimming hearts might unfold

Suddenly losing my train of thought
I snap back to dreary reality
The woods will always call to me
Beckoning with their tranquility...



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Ayushi_austen said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 7:38 am
thank u soooo much..its comments like urs that really encourage people 2 keep writing!! more of this ..coming soon!!
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 9:52 pm
I think "simply amazing" is the best way to describe this. :)
 
Ayme S. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 11:46 am
whoa, this is really good, and so true. please check up my poetry too! and dont stop posting!
 
nikkigonefishin said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 12:03 am
Its beautiful. I love the imagery it formed in my head. And you are so right, sometimes people get so caught up with their hectic shedules(like me:) that they don't realize nature's beauty that surrounds us everyday.
 
LazyDaisyTheWriter said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 5:25 pm
i loved it and the photograph. keep writing!
 
tori123654 said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 12:23 pm
it's breathtaking, truly beautiful! : )
 
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