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Seasick Love Poem

I am sea-sick from your love,
The constant ups
The constant downs
The mysteries of when you leave,
And why you’re not around.

The constant change in how you feel,
Love so strong
And then so weak,
Makes it hard to know where I stand
And what you really think.

Your fickle ways has got me hopeless,
How it will end,
You’ll choose
But for now I’ll just wait out the ride,
And try to keep down my food.



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thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 10:17 pm:
i really love the metaphor! on the lsat stanza i would change the first line to Your fickle ways have me hopeless. other than that though, this is really nice. i enjoyed it!!!
 
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