August 9, 2011
Grateful for all you have given me,
Gold, gold, gold,
Giving it all to me,
Gold seems to be the only thing you have to offer me,
Gold is no longer pretty it is cold.

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Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 12:21 pm
I like the tone in this poem, you seem to be mocking the giver of gold in the second and last lines. i agree- great message!
Regs_the_Shorty replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 6:43 pm
Thank you!
Snake_Tongue said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 4:28 pm
I like this a lot .. :) I am guessing you are basically that someone cant buy you over with gifts??
Regs_the_Shorty replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 4:40 pm
Yeah I'd rather have them spend their money on a charity rather then think I'm a charity or that they think that they can win me over with presents
Snake_Tongue replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 4:41 pm
Well it is a really good message to send out!! And this is really good too :) 
Regs_the_Shorty replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 5:59 pm
Thanks lots!!!!
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