Freedom

July 28, 2011
By Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
9 articles 7 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what your thoughts make it.
Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don't have someone to share it with.
A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.


The moments
We were in love,
Were the moments
I lived.

The moments
We fought,
Were the moments
I grew stronger.

The moment
We broke up,
Was the moment
I broke free.


The author's comments:
A little something about a relationship from my past.

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AriShine GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2012 at 12:51 pm
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one." -Abraham Lincoln

Dramatic wording, relatable message. Nice work!

Mystiecub said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 11:35 am
Wow. I can relate to this poem. Great work, keep writing :D

on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:28 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

ur welcome :p

on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:36 am
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
9 articles 7 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what your thoughts make it.
Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don't have someone to share it with.
A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

Thank you very much for commenting. 

on Aug. 5 2011 at 11:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i love that it was short and to the pint i write short pieces to and it's nice to see that other people write short pieces also this w as beautiful i loved the last 2 stanzas

on Aug. 4 2011 at 2:09 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

Nice!!! It kind of surprised me when it ended so soon, but I actually love what you're saying in here. It flows very well too :)

on Aug. 3 2011 at 10:25 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
11 articles 2 photos 276 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

Five stars, my friend. Simply wonderful


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