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The moments
We were in love,
Were the moments
I lived.

The moments
We fought,
Were the moments
I grew stronger.

The moment
We broke up,
Was the moment
I broke free.



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AriShine This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 12:51 pm
Dramatic wording, relatable message. Nice work!
 
Mystiecub said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 11:35 am
Wow. I can relate to this poem. Great work, keep writing :D
 
musicispassion said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 11:17 pm
i love that it was short and to the pint i write short pieces to and it's nice to see that other people write short pieces also this w as beautiful i loved the last 2 stanzas
 
Ha-5-rika replied...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 10:36 am
Thank you very much for commenting. 
 
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:28 pm
ur welcome :p
 
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 2:09 am
Nice!!! It kind of surprised me when it ended so soon, but I actually love what you're saying in here. It flows very well too :)
 
Lola_Black said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 10:25 pm
Five stars, my friend. Simply wonderful
 
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