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Noticeable

June 3, 2011
By Beccaboo00795 BRONZE, Canyon Country, California
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Beccaboo00795 BRONZE, Canyon Country, California
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Favorite Quote:
I hold it to be the inalienable right of anybody to go to hell in his own way. ~Robert Frost

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walking through the emptiness
fighting my way through the frustration
battling my tears

the water comes rushing
sweeping me off my feet
I'm helpless in a sea of chaos

i lay still cold as ice
i watch my body
as it floats to the top

I'm too late
I'm hard as a rock
I'm still as a statue

and now I'm noticed

© Abbey O., Marblehead, MA

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