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I've noticed you changed
And become the shell
of a girl that I used to know well
You look the same
Talk the same
Sound the same
But where are you?
For your actions have changed
And all that's left is a hollow shell
Of the girl
That once was perfect
And the loneliness is overwhelming
And my heart is seized
Where have you gone?
You're a ghost
A shell
An empty, discarded soul
I used to know you so well
But you've disappeared from my life
And I threw back the remaining shell
Back into the ocean of regret and memories



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PennyM.L said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 3:12 pm:
I like it :) I can relate.
 
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AnonymousKLM said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 10:10 pm:

This is really good! (:

I love it, keep writing!

 
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Aug. 12, 2011 at 10:12 pm :
Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)
 
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