Twisted Prayer

Now I lay me
down to sleep.
I wait of the demons
to creep,
from out of the closet
and under the bed.
Coming from all the dark corners
inside my head.
Their bloody fangs
and ripping claws,
they lay me open
and expose my flaws.
Far away from the light,
and away from the sun.
Trapped in a place
where there’s nowhere to run.
All through the night,
alone with my fears.
Drowning from the
weight of my tears.
With no one to pray too.
And no soul to take.
I sleep with the demons,
until the time that I wake.





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RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 2:48 pm
Yow! After the first two lines, that changed alot lol xD it was really good though, I love weird and unusual morbid poems like that!
 
leafy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 9:30 am
Again, another excellent poem. I some areas it didn't flow very well, but other than that, great job!
 
Snake_Tongue said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 3:27 pm
.Stars Stars Stars.
 
musicispassion said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 11:44 pm
boy or girl? i like the darkness yopur poems have it's weird but the way u describe it makes it beautiful
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 8:01 pm

Whoah!

This was awesome I love the morbid , dark aspect to it. Absolutely amazing !

You rhymed it well too!

 
shadowrider said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 10:21 pm
OKAY THIS IS AMAZING! I absolutely loved this poem! This is going on favorites! Do you see me? *clicks on favorites* Really and truly awesome job! I love the rhythm, rhyme scheme, word choice, and entire feel of the poem! This is completely awesome! Keep up the amazing work!
 
LoveOnHerArms replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 1:38 am
:D thank you so much!!!
 
Jesusfreak78 replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 9:13 am
prettey good(am I'm a tough critic) I'm trying to find out what the demons are a methphor for lol
 
BlackFire replied...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 12:15 pm
wow very different...though I like how you twisted it. 
 
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