A killers wish

July 14, 2011
The bones that crack,
When I look into my fears I find, shakes and buses,
My sight is black,
I don’t know where I am in life,
The winter turns to a summer chill,
The tree I once new ignores me,
Is he alive?
Or is he dead?
Am I sane?
Where is my reality,
Leaning over this dead body,
Feeling as though I’m lost,
My insanity grows stronger,
My pain grows weaker,

What am I now?
A killer of a thousand souls?
Have I forgotten yesterday or is it all a dream?

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Aderes18 said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 3:33 pm

Well, I read the poem another time and I think I got the message now. Very, very dark. Butit's still great writing and a good poem. :)

Reminded me of The Tell-tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe. 

The.Messenger.777 replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 4:13 am
sweet im being compared to edger alen poe, i have never red any of his poetry tho
Aderes18 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 6:16 am
This poem confuses me! Sorry!
Anagam replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 3:06 pm
I'm a fan of your work, I think you know that by now. :) But I am kinda confused too. I totally understand it has a deep meaning. Do you think you can tell me a little more about the poem?
The.Messenger.777 replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 10:32 am
just the way you might feel if you killd somebody
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