A killers wish

July 14, 2011
By Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"


The bones that crack,
When I look into my fears I find, shakes and buses,
My sight is black,
I don’t know where I am in life,
The winter turns to a summer chill,
The tree I once new ignores me,
Is he alive?
Or is he dead?
Am I sane?
Where is my reality,
Leaning over this dead body,
Feeling as though I’m lost,
My insanity grows stronger,
My pain grows weaker,

What am I now?
A killer of a thousand souls?
Have I forgotten yesterday or is it all a dream?


The author's comments:
sometimes we don't know who we are. sometimes we lose sconce of reality. what is reality anyway?
the scariest part of reality is what your reality is

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on Jul. 27 2011 at 4:13 am
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

sweet im being compared to edger alen poe, i have never red any of his poetry tho

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 3:33 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Well, I read the poem another time and I think I got the message now. Very, very dark. Butit's still great writing and a good poem. :)

Reminded me of The Tell-tale Heart by Edgar Allen Poe. 


on Jul. 26 2011 at 10:32 am
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"

just the way you might feel if you killd somebody

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 3:06 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I'm a fan of your work, I think you know that by now. :) But I am kinda confused too. I totally understand it has a deep meaning. Do you think you can tell me a little more about the poem?

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 6:16 am
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

This poem confuses me! Sorry!


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