(too)trusting (?)

July 14, 2011
By Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes

It's important:
It prays on your fears.
Holds the balance in all
That you hold dear.
One flaw in a story, you don't want to see-
Other people saying, how dumb you can be-

If you didn't love them
What makes me different?special?
Am I just a game
Do I mean so little?

The ideas
They are ALL ridiculous.
My love; he's here to stay
I give him my heart and soul and
All I can do is pray--

Pray the world is not so wicked
As others have proven before.
Pray he always will be here
This man that I adore.

The one who needs to open up, just a little-
The one I give myself to,
With a fear I may be broken-

All this is way to much
I'm crazy,
Can't see--
Blissfully in love
Just us,
Is all I want to be.

The author's comments:
When everything is too perfect, and you are trapped in my head, all that's left is too much worry to function, and nothing seems like it's how you want it to be.

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