Pebbles

July 18, 2011
By PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)


I want to get lost
Just to fight my way back
To you
To prove
I know
I should have made the walk
Sometime, just so you could hear the pebbles on your window
Again.
But I didn't
Just to make sure
To you
To prove
I am
Not him, and never will be.


The author's comments:
I'd use raisins, just to be safe.

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on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:59 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

honestly i don't know i have an idea but then i don't

on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:47 am
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

I'd rather know what *you* think it is about :)

on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:42 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

what is this about i really enjoyed this

on Jul. 30 2011 at 2:29 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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This poem is great, but the 7th line seems too long compared to the rest of the poem. Maybe you could break it into "Sometime/just so you could hear/the pebbles/on your window"

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:32 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

The sentence breaks made a nice touch. Good job!

austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 10:18 am
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

I agree, I thought your quote was quite funny :)  I really enjoyed the poem, as well - at first the line breaks threw me off, but I think they work well within the poem.  Overall, reallly nice job!

on Jul. 27 2011 at 10:39 am
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

hahaha I love your quote! I literally laughed out loud! As for your poem, i really like it. It's interesting, in a good way. Great job!


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