possibilities

July 18, 2011
By chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.


since the beginning
I've wanted to change it all
since the beginning
I've walked down this hall
ever white
ever unchanging
i cant fight it
i must go with the flow
rough waters
challenge my sleep
and my sanity
take a deep
calming breath
and try not to think
about possible death
think about
possibilities
ever present
ever unchanging
possible positives
uncountable
possibilities


The author's comments:
just lookin back on my past..ya know? seeing all the things that can happen...

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on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:41 pm
RoseMonster GOLD, Plainville, Connecticut
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Hey, this was good. I really liked the smooth transition from line to line, especially the "go with the flow/ rough waters/ challenge my sleep" part. It's nice, with very distinct images but a little abstractness/room for personal variation, which I like in poetry. Keep writing, and if you feel like it, check out my work.

on Nov. 30 2011 at 6:46 pm
brynnibooo BRONZE, Huntington, West Virginia
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This is good! The only thing i would change is "ever unchanging".... I think that using "ever" and "unchanging" together is awkward. You could use "Ever white, never changing" and keep the same syntax. do you mind checking out my poems? I would really appreciate it! -Keep Writing! 

on Oct. 17 2011 at 5:00 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

Great poem! I hope you keep writing, I look forward to reading more! Check out some of my new poems and other works?

on Aug. 15 2011 at 2:25 pm
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

thanks!!!!

TapTap SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 10:10 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

Love it! Keep writing all of ur poems are fantastic!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 3:55 pm
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

 yeahh lol xP

on Jul. 21 2011 at 3:27 pm
SoCalBarbie SILVER, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"whoever said the sky is the limit was incorrect, because I saw footprints on the moon."

ohhh ok I gotts iit(X

on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:06 am
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

well yeah i get it but it has many different meanings like... you can view it as a window to the future to look ahead to see whats coming or you can look at it as like a person whos like in their past and all they want to do is change then they see the light at the end of the tunnel...

on Jul. 20 2011 at 8:25 pm
SoCalBarbie SILVER, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"whoever said the sky is the limit was incorrect, because I saw footprints on the moon."

I love it and totally feel ya, but theirs kind of a question mark on it ya feel me? like it's bomb but i kinda didn't get it til i read you personal comment thingy on da side.

on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:11 pm
dark.poet BRONZE, Guelph, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Today a young man on acid realized that all matter is merely energy condensed into a slow vibration.That we are all one conciousness experiencing itself subjectively... Bill Hicks.

This is beautiful. I could relate. I see it as like a deep struggle to change but the things that hold you down are the things you have to break free of to see the possibilities. and hey, it'd be awesome if you checked out my poem, it's kind of like this one. Keep writing !

  


on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:06 pm
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

basically it is but i dunno i just wrote it

I LIKE PIE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 12:22 pm
sorry... the whole poem didn't get through... oh well. 

I LIKE PIE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 12:21 pm

Here is a poem!

The poem poem;

It takes smarts, and it takes time,to come up with a rhythm, to think of a rhyme.oem!


I LIKE PIE said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 12:18 pm

Is this a poem about free will? It sure seems like it... Any way, I love it. 

p.s. I wish I could be a member of teen ink, but I am only 12. I'm posting my poems on commenst in order to share them. Take that!


on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:56 pm
Goodguy1200 SILVER, Wyoming, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What a frightening thing is the human, a mass of gauges and dials and registers, and we can read only a few and those perhaps not accurately."- One Tree Hill

I like this haha. Its pretty good, it made me think on some of the things in my past too. p.s. if its not too much trouble, i was wondering if you could look at one of my pieces. Its a poem called "A Loss for Words"


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