Lonely Suffering

July 12, 2011
Some lonely nights are spent flooding with tears,
Thinking about change and other fears,
I don't understand how or why,
I just hold a fake smile as the days go by.





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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 4:18 pm

It's amazing how four lines hold so much meaning. I mean really. I could take so much out of this short poem. Part of me likes that it was short and to the point, but the other half wants more! This could be a great start to a short story! You should consider it (: Check out some of my work?

GOOD JOB!!

 
kk10TM said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 1:58 pm
I agree with the other commenters. I enjoyed it. =] 
 
silent_reader said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 1:35 pm
it was short... but different... unique. i liked it a lot
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 9:14 pm
Sad. I like your rhyme scheme and the emotion you put into this. Check out my work?
 
Live4literature said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 2:10 pm
Short but to the point, Enjoyed.
 
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