Lonely Suffering

July 12, 2011
By elliebelly BRONZE, Dallas, Georgia
elliebelly BRONZE, Dallas, Georgia
4 articles 7 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
live for today, tomorrow may never come.


Some lonely nights are spent flooding with tears,
Thinking about change and other fears,
I don't understand how or why,
I just hold a fake smile as the days go by.


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on Jul. 16 2011 at 4:18 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

It's amazing how four lines hold so much meaning. I mean really. I could take so much out of this short poem. Part of me likes that it was short and to the point, but the other half wants more! This could be a great start to a short story! You should consider it (: Check out some of my work?

GOOD JOB!!


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on Jul. 15 2011 at 1:58 pm
kk10TM GOLD, Burlington, Kentucky
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I agree with the other commenters. I enjoyed it. =] 

on Jul. 15 2011 at 1:35 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books." - Thomas Jefferson

it was short... but different... unique. i liked it a lot

on Jul. 14 2011 at 9:14 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

Sad. I like your rhyme scheme and the emotion you put into this. Check out my work?

on Jul. 14 2011 at 2:10 pm
Live4literature SILVER, Homer, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you do not love yourself, then who shall other than thee almighty?"
"Be like a postage stamp, stick to something until you get there"

Short but to the point, Enjoyed.


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