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The Will of Acceptance

July 13, 2011
By vzimmerman PLATINUM, Ontario, New York
vzimmerman PLATINUM, Ontario, New York
40 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Happiness is the key to success, if you love what your doing you will be successful."


Is she adopted or just misplaced?
Every time I go out that's what I hear because of the color on my face.
Is it my fault for being mixed raced?
This immediate judgment is what I've always faced.
So what if I was adopted would that change how I see.
How I live how I feel and who I am going to be?
No matter where I come from in your judge mental eyes, open them wider, clearer
And realize.
It's not where you come from, but what is on the inside.
How big is your heart and soul?
How bad you want something, how big our your goals.
Your compassion to people and to this world.
Seems though you lack some of this because you assume by how I look that I am
Just a tragic adopted girl.
Family is should not be determined by the blood in your veins but the will of
Acceptance.
In a way we shall all be family.



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on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:09 pm
vzimmerman PLATINUM, Ontario, New York
40 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Happiness is the key to success, if you love what your doing you will be successful."

Thank you for the comment! And to all the people below. I love all all the comments say either "honest" or "true." I love it because when I write I write from the heart and for all of you guys to notice it. That just makes me smile. I am glad you all liked it and thank you so much for commenting. 

on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:08 pm
vzimmerman PLATINUM, Ontario, New York
40 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Happiness is the key to success, if you love what your doing you will be successful."

Thank you so much for this comment! I am glad my writings can connect with people well. :) 

on Jul. 17 2011 at 3:23 pm
jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
8 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
tis better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all.

i have friends that are adopted by white people and there black and this is how they feel.... great job :)

on Jul. 15 2011 at 7:08 pm
KatrinaCampbell GOLD, Aguadilla, Other
10 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
When God answers your prayers, you have faith in His abilities. When He doesn't, he has faith in YOUR abilities!

This is so true :) Love it!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 1:25 pm
Joceluna SILVER, Racine, Minnesota
7 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not be overcome by evil, but overcome evil with good.
Romans 12:21

I loved it!! very honest writing. :)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 10:52 am
WritingGirlKyla14 PLATINUM, West Valley, Utah
24 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
10.
I am a princess, all girls are. Even if they live in tiny old attics. Even if they dress in rags, even if they aren't pretty or smart or young. They're still princesses, all of us." -Frances Hodgeson Burnett, A Little Princess
or
1.
Live in the present, remember the past and fear not the future, for it doesn't exist and never shall. There is only now." _Christopher Paolini, Eldest

So great and beautiful. I love it.

~K  : )


on Jul. 14 2011 at 10:08 am
TheDuchess GOLD, Johannesburg, Other
12 articles 2 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who are you?" - Lewis Carroll, Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, Chapter 5

"And nothing 'gainst Time's scythe can make defence
Save breed, to brave him when he takes thee hence."
-William Shakespeare,When I Do Count The Clock That Tells The Time

beautiful and so very true

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on Jul. 13 2011 at 9:15 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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very true! great job. i love that...

in a way we shall all be family