This Family Will Hold You

July 13, 2011
These times are almost too painful to bare.
No one who understands, no one who cares.
You’re in a time where you feel you’re completely alone.
But I hope truth hits you like a cold sharpened stone.
Unity and togetherness is what keeps the world from becoming insane.
So together we can help you get through all this pain.
We can help you through what you call this war.
Help pick you up like never before.
The look in your eyes seems as if sadness is your curse.
Makes us concerned and were looking out for you, putting you first
Through your darkest days,
we will empower you like the mighty sun’s rays.
When the night falls on you, and seems like your heart can’t go on no more.
This family will hold you with our love to the core.
With this group, this team,
no matter what we will destroy what is now your worst dream.
No matter where you are and where you’re going to go.
This great family will always love you so.
I know I don’t want you to leave, but it’s your choice.
There are reasons I want you to stay if you listened to my voice.
Just remember were here for you even when you’re in a bad state.
Your our friend, you’re in this group for a reason, your great.
We will stand by what is now your depressed mind forever.
I mean what's family, if they don’t stick together?

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msoccerm345 said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 3:07 pm
this is an amazing poem:) this is exactly what my friends did for me this past year:) they are totally my family and i am going to miss them sooo much when i go to a different school:( i loved this poem so much! definately dont stop writing!
vzimmerman replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 12:59 pm
I am glad that my writing piece can connect with someone so much. That is usually my goal. To let the world know you are not the only one feeling that way and that there is always always hope. Thanks for reading my poem and commenting :) 
Joceluna said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 1:32 pm

Absolutley loved it!! you are a very good writer!


vzimmerman replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 1:00 pm
Thank you for reading and even commenting on my poem. It makes me so happy when people enjoy my work. (:
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