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Come with me and we'll get lost
Amidst the fog in our minds and darkened skies.



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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 6:10 pm:

This wouldn't be half bad as a haiku, it would seem more complete in that form, at least.Don't get me wrond, though, it is beautiful :)

This is beautiful, it's abruptness is like a short breath of air, soft and sweet. (So beautiful, that I must repeat myself, it seems.)

 
clairexaudrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 10:10 pm :

Thank you so much(:

I'm just not very fond of the haiku form, I don't like having to break up my thoughts to fit a certain form. I am a strong believer in the rule that there are no rules in poetry, any kind of restrictions seem like I'm gasping for air haha.

 
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