Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > untitled untitled By clairexaudrey, Bethel, CT More by this author Amidst the fog in our minds and darkened skies. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse IamtheshyStargirl said... Jul. 13, 2011 at 6:10 pm: This wouldn't be half bad as a haiku, it would seem more complete in that form, at least.Don't get me wrond, though, it is beautiful :) This is beautiful, it's abruptness is like a short breath of air, soft and sweet. (So beautiful, that I must repeat myself, it seems.) clairexaudrey replied... Jul. 13, 2011 at 10:10 pm : Thank you so much(: I'm just not very fond of the haiku form, I don't like having to break up my thoughts to fit a certain form. I am a strong believer in the rule that there are no rules in poetry, any kind of restrictions seem like I'm gasping for air haha.