Come with me and we'll get lost
Amidst the fog in our minds and darkened skies.
Amidst the fog in our minds and darkened skies.
IamtheshyStargirl
This wouldn't be half bad as a haiku, it would seem more complete in that form, at least.Don't get me wrond, though, it is beautiful :)
This is beautiful, it's abruptness is like a short breath of air, soft and sweet. (So beautiful, that I must repeat myself, it seems.)
Thank you so much(:
I'm just not very fond of the haiku form, I don't like having to break up my thoughts to fit a certain form. I am a strong believer in the rule that there are no rules in poetry, any kind of restrictions seem like I'm gasping for air haha.
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