Lost In This War

July 8, 2011
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I sit between the war
I'm tired of it all
The crying
The yelling
The hurt
I pull my feet up to my cheast
trying to hide the pain
But all I hear are the screams
She's crying. I cant take it!
I want to go to the happy place Everyone talks about
I have been so close just to have It yanked away
Now I cower In my thoughts
I want my friends back
And my family
But I cant I'm lost
Lost in this war

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Jellybeann said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 8:57 pm
Love this poem, but again, grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc... i think needs a little work but can be easily fixed. I also would add some rhyming to it to make it more catchy and memorable, it appeals to the eye more and is more attractive, for me. Good work and keep it up! :)
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