July 8, 2011
A reminder of what
I am
a fat
pimpled nose
greasy haired
imperfectly perfect

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Ha-5-rika said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 10:43 am
It is a really wonderful piece of work. Short, simple, but meaningful. I like the phrase, "imperfectly perfect". Good job.
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:25 pm
thank u i don't think this is my strongest pieces though :P
Vicky11 said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 11:51 am
So very true :) Yet, is that really what you see as you? I mean, all that stuff will go away, so I really doubt that you should think of yourself as that. How about a good poet? :)
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 2:58 pm
i know and thanks
Mystiecub said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 9:08 am
Heh...ironically enough this is how I see MYSELF. Not really much I can say because the greasy-haired part is true :P (my hair doesnt like to stay soft even after I wash it like twice in one day sometimes its quite annoying)
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 9:31 pm
i've tried everything to make the greasy hair go away i may have founs somehting though
ttlove21 said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:08 am
Good but YOU are NOT i love you the way you are!!!!!
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 11:07 pm
thanks !! :P
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 3:01 am
This poem is good. Nice one.
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 2:42 pm
thank you not one of my strongest though
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:23 pm

A great emotional poem!

When I look in the mirror, I often see myself the same way.  But thinking of yourself like that is the perfect way to go insane.  You shouldn't compare yourself to others because you are unique and to quote that song "you were born this way."

Delictious said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:11 pm
Everyone has felt that way one time in their life, but you have to just be true to yourself and realize that everyone is beautiful in their own way!
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 11:50 pm
haha "I'm beautiful in my way cuz god makes no mistakes i'm on the right track baby i was born this way don't hide yourself in regret just love urself and your set" I love that song and I'm taking care of what i said bout myself
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:07 pm
I can see that you feel insecure. I really like the line "imperfectly perfect".  Hey, be yourself and enjoy it!
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 9:55 pm
I always am myself my family doesn't think so though.. anyways thanks and i'm taking care of things that i said about myself
ElleNicole said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:13 am

This is good. =) It's short, but I'm able to see the vulnerability in this. It was brought out well. Nice work!

Would you mind giving me feedback on my poem? Thanks if you do!

musicispassion replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 1:10 pm
no problem
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