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As you fall asleep in my arms
Another tear rolls down my cheek
For these are the moments I live for
Time with you is all I seek

Your smile warms my heart
Your hugs make it melt
And your passionate kisses
Something better I've never felt

If you ever left me
I could die right on the spot
If I had to watch you go
I can't even stand the thought

'Too young to know of love'
That is what we've been told
But anyone who really knows
On this idea could never be sold

We both know true love
We feel it everyday
And I would trade the whole world
To always feel this way

To always hear you laugh
And always feel you touch
To always see your smile
Because I love you *this* much

I can not put in to words
Exactly how I feel
But I'll use my actions
And on one knee I'll kneel

And offer you a promise
To forever belong to you
Please take this ring and say these words
I do, I do, I do.





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musicsaves said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 9:14 pm
Truly brilliant and beautiful..:) check out my work? Comment,rate..any ideas that would be great!
 
Maxwell_SQ said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 11:48 am
Wow, in the mag? That would be really intense. Thank you for your kind words.
 
AllysonMarie said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:25 pm
This is brilliant. I love how you used young love as the topic. i totally agree with it! I agree ^^ It should be in the Mag. Great Job! (:
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 10:16 pm
This is really romantic and sweet. :) Very well written too. If you have time could you check out some of my work?
 
hanging_girl_666This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:34 am
wow. Exactly how i feel. Amazing. This should be in the magazine!
 
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