You have fallen

June 28, 2011
By pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
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We promised to be best friends until the very end
We fought, we laughed, and we picked each other up when we fell
So we promised through blood tiers and rage we would always come out okay
Until the day you finally reach what you liked to call “fame”
And I just sat back and watched our friendship dwindle away

It was all you ever wanted when we started high school and what we had was obviously stopped being important to you
You did everything and anything it took to get you, were you are, and made every sacrifice, took every risk.
And now I can’t even look at what I use to call a friend because the sight of you makes me sick

At first your rise to fame didn’t seem like such a sham but then big things between us started well they start to change
Whenever we hung out it seemed like I was a burden to you things didn’t seem the same
Then at school you wouldn’t even say hello that’s when I knew it was my cue to go

But then things got worse and I never saw it coming you just couldn’t stop your mouth from running
I heard the things you told about me those nasty lies, yours were the only words that ever made me cry

After a few weeks you stopped and I never heard from you again
But I still would look on after all you were once a friend
And months past and I got to see you fall
But this time I wasn’t there to help you stand back up straight and tall

So how does it feel to know you have fallen and have no one left
To know you would have had me if you hadn’t plunged those daggers into my chest….



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on Aug. 6 2011 at 12:05 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

lots of emotion and hurt i could feel it on my shoulders great job

on Aug. 6 2011 at 12:02 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

lots of emoton and hurt i could feel it on my shoulders u come up with oerfect titles i suck at comin gup eith titles

on Jul. 23 2011 at 5:24 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Deep and astounding

on Jul. 21 2011 at 7:27 am
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
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Im so gald people like this! :)

 


Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 8:31 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Can totally feel the emotion behind it. Might have to save this for next year....

missC BRONZE said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 12:29 pm
missC BRONZE, Rosedale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You live you learn/ every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end/ everything happen for a reason

THIS IS GREAT RLLY GREAT!!! :)

Uga10 SILVER said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 10:27 am
Uga10 SILVER, Verbena, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Money grows on the tree of persistance!

i really like this too.

on Jul. 11 2011 at 8:20 am
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
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Thank you so much! this is my first acticle they posted on the website so thankyou soooo much!

Allie99 SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 1:20 pm
Allie99 SILVER, Saginaw, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
“Hard work beats talent when talent doesn’t work hard.” ~Tim Notke

I am of few words for you, but many for my paper. ~Anonymous

This was well written and I can definitely relate.

dashi BRONZE said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 3:00 pm
dashi BRONZE, Brandamore, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
All dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them.

This is amazing. It's like an insight to your heart. Well written.

on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:09 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

oh my gosh i loved this. it was really sad, got the reader to think and feel, and was beautifully described. good job! :)

on Jul. 8 2011 at 11:51 am
barleyblueeyes BRONZE, Princeton, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"There's always gonna be some in your life saying "you can't do it!" I say 'SCREW THAT GUY!' " -hayley williams.

This is really amazing and it made me think. (:


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