You have fallen

We promised to be best friends until the very end
We fought, we laughed, and we picked each other up when we fell
So we promised through blood tiers and rage we would always come out okay
Until the day you finally reach what you liked to call “fame”
And I just sat back and watched our friendship dwindle away

It was all you ever wanted when we started high school and what we had was obviously stopped being important to you
You did everything and anything it took to get you, were you are, and made every sacrifice, took every risk.
And now I can’t even look at what I use to call a friend because the sight of you makes me sick

At first your rise to fame didn’t seem like such a sham but then big things between us started well they start to change
Whenever we hung out it seemed like I was a burden to you things didn’t seem the same
Then at school you wouldn’t even say hello that’s when I knew it was my cue to go

But then things got worse and I never saw it coming you just couldn’t stop your mouth from running
I heard the things you told about me those nasty lies, yours were the only words that ever made me cry

After a few weeks you stopped and I never heard from you again
But I still would look on after all you were once a friend
And months past and I got to see you fall
But this time I wasn’t there to help you stand back up straight and tall

So how does it feel to know you have fallen and have no one left
To know you would have had me if you hadn’t plunged those daggers into my chest….





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musicispassion said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 12:05 am
lots of emotion and hurt i could feel it on my shoulders great job
 
musicispassion said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 12:02 am
lots of emoton and hurt i could feel it on my shoulders u come up with oerfect titles i suck at comin gup eith titles
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:24 pm
Deep and astounding
 
Robyn97 said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 8:31 pm
Can totally feel the emotion behind it. Might have to save this for next year....
 
LoveOnHerArms replied...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 7:27 am

Im so gald people like this! :)

 

 
missC said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 12:29 pm
THIS IS GREAT RLLY GREAT!!! :)
 
Uga10 said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 10:27 am
i really like this too.
 
Allie99 said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 1:20 pm
This was well written and I can definitely relate.
 
dashi said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 3:00 pm
This is amazing. It's like an insight to your heart. Well written.
 
SmileyFace13 said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 1:09 pm
oh my gosh i loved this. it was really sad, got the reader to think and feel, and was beautifully described. good job! :)
 
barleyblueeyes said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 11:51 am
This is really amazing and it made me think. (:
 
LoveOnHerArms replied...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 8:20 am
Thank you so much! this is my first acticle they posted on the website so thankyou soooo much!
 
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