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She walks in beauty
showing her scars
from past love and pain.
She is like a fierce goddess
and a gentle flower
all in one.
I watch now
scared and unsure
of how to proceed
of how to make her
heart mine, now and forever
but alas,it be only a dream, love
Only a dream.
Though the swelling of my heart
gives permission
She trusts no one
for she been deceived
every time her heart skipped for
another
Her dazzling smile cast
a beautiful curse on me
a curse I call love.
Can it be love with no trust?
One can only hope.
One can only dream.
For she walks in beauty
and has stolen my heart.




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Blue4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 11:53 am:

Beautiful work. Five stars, you deserve it.

Can you please look at some of my work and tell me what you think?

 
Niarra_Nightmare replied...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 4:38 pm :
Of course! Aspiring writers and poets have to help each other out. Who's gonna understand you more than another writer or poet.
 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 6:58 pm:
This is simply incredible! Keep writing!
 
Niarra_Nightmare replied...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 10:09 pm :
Thank you! That's just what I needed to hear today! And you know what, you got it! I have a lot more where this piece came from. ^^ Thank you for commenting. Please tell your friends to read and give me comments. I love hearing what the world has to say about my art.
 
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