Visions

June 20, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


All I see is the
image
of you and me
holding hands
holding me
till I saw
you and her
holding hands
holding her



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on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:21 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

the heart break one isn't but this ine and vines isn't about a relatonship i've never been in one but it's true about the other poems

on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:54 am
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
9 articles 7 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what your thoughts make it.
Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don't have someone to share it with.
A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

Are your heartbreak poems based on past relationships? 'Cause they are amazing?

on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:07 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

haha ok i'll check

on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:04 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks clever screen ane miss you

on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:02 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
5 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

oommmgggg once again I see how this involves youu-knoww-whooo lol fantastic! :)

on Jul. 10 2011 at 11:39 am
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

and on that note, your lucky numbers ar 1,5,7,3,54, and 9. live, laugh, don't bet money, and check out some of my work if you ever get the chance. ;)

on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:39 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

ya u r like a fortune cookie thanks

on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:32 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

the image of two people holding hands always makes makes me think of a trap closing down...love can become a beautiful cage.

on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:06 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

actually i've never had a boyfriend this and my other love poems are based off a looong story

on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:02 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Aw, this is sad.  It's like your other poem, 'Vines'.  I'm guessing you recently suffered a break-up?  If so, my heart goes out to you.

on Jul. 6 2011 at 7:16 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

awww thanks everyone I;m sorry about punctuation but I don't worry about it in my poetry. In all other aspects of writing I do.

on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:05 am
ArgonElement SILVER, The Woodlands, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Question Authority.

Short and unbelievably sweet.

on Jul. 6 2011 at 10:05 am
FrownMonaLisa SILVER, Arlington, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened

Really cute. Sad but sweet at the same time. I love it. But try not to let your words be so choppy and use some punctuation where there should be pauses. Other than that AMAZING

on Jul. 6 2011 at 4:28 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

few words but "aw!"


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