A Response

Aced it, dude!

I know exactly how you feel! sometimes its just so much more fun to write abstract stuff and question life and make a mockery of things! I love all your stuff though, keep up the good work. :)

So true/relatable.

You know, there are quite a few poems that have been published that I don't like at all, and so many that I love and are barely recognized.
Writing can be frustrating. And in the end, you need to write as yourself, for yourself.(: great work

this is great! this is the kind of poem tht makes me smile... honesty is the core of poetry so even though this work is simple i love it!! :)

I can relate to writing out of frustration. Some of my best poems come out of frustration. Also, I find that when I try certain styles or types of poems they always turn into me and my style because after all,whatever I write is me. So, this is you, and I loved it. Differently different and spectacular.

i like this poem a lot, its just your thoughts kinda put out there, and the rythm was good too. and i also agree, i like the end with the "sort of". keep up the good work! 5/5

' Sort Of.'

I love twist like that because i say that stuff all the time. My parents will be like," You okay?" and I'd say," Yes im a happy girl with amazing parents straight As a good school a lot of friends." and then when the walk out of the room Id say," If only."

haha. I know. I always wind up writing poems with weird personifications or descriptions that are of course really very easy for me to understand, but not as easy to others. I read ALL of these poems about relationships and/or dark thoughts, and everyone loves them! I wish i could write something like that, but i always wind up writing MY style. But don't worry! That's a good thing. IT"S YOU! I really liked this poem a lot! `"" thumbs up, up, up! :)

Good job! I really like this poem! 5 out of 5 stars! Keep it up! :)