You (No More)

May 26, 2011
What is it you do for me
That I don’t do for you?
Do you save me from skies of gray
But I not you from seas of blue?

You travel ‘cross the flaming roads
To save me from myself
But when I do the same for you
You turn to someone else

You go and say that you are true
But you are one to lie
For I am here to stop you now
And give a last goodbye





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Anagam said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 3:22 pm
You are an awesome poet! This poem made sense. I could feel a little ache in my heart as I read it. Keep writing. :D
 
Little-Irish-Girl said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 12:09 pm
the last two comments have pretty much said it all so I'm going to say BRAVO!!!!!!! and your poem is so heartfelt=awesomeness
 
14MNKMizzu1 said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 11:19 pm
I strongly agree with zombiegurls comment. That poem really did contain so much feeling. It engulfed you in it. Bravo, I think that is a skill alot of poets try to master but can't, and you really did.
 
zombiegurl said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 9:02 pm
This poem has so much feeling. I love it, and it does feel strong! don't stop sharing your feelings.
 
-kristina said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 12:38 pm

i belive this peice it turly grate

i enjoyed it

it made me think of how mi love wasnt returend and thatim still working to try and get it.

i would really like if you could read some of mi work please and comment it and tell me what you think

<3 kj

 
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