You Were

May 25, 2011
You were my heart,
you were my soul.
I was the horse you were the cart.
Trapped inside a bowl,
Sides coated with slippery misery.
With a lid made of heartbreak trapping me in.
You were the glue to my puzzle,
The clay of my sculpture,
If you vanished I would fall apart.
You were my mind,
You were my sanity.
Without you I don't know what I'll be.

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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 5:41 pm
Very good! I liked the repetition of "you were"
renni said...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 2:11 pm
beautiful!! :D
Kaleighgirl97 replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 12:09 pm
thankyou! i thought it sounded kindof sappy and i wasnt gonna post it but my sis convinced me it couldnt hurt.
renni replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 3:27 pm
we'll im glad you posted it :D 
Kaleighgirl97 replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 4:15 pm
lol thanks. do you have anywork yoiu want me to loook at?
renni replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 9:52 pm
lol, if u want u could look at my work, but if u don't that's alright. lol :D 
sakina replied...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 11:43 am
Really beautiful..And i think you could improve and write the best poems teen ink has ever seen ...:)!
Kaleighgirl97 replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 4:39 pm
lol tahnks im trying to improve.
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