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Remembering Us

Us

It’s 11:11, my head on the pillow
I dream of us beneath the willow,
Lying next to you, holding your hand
As we listen to our favorite band.
I look and your eyes, more blue than the sea
And think, “ Do you feel the same for me?”
Then you kiss my lips, whisper my name
And assure me that you feel the same.

It’s 6:05, I get out of bed
And I still can’t get you out of my head.
I’m sorry for everything I’ve put you through
And all the ways that I have hurt you.
So now I say goodbye dear friend,
I really hope this isn’t the end.
And remember, no matter what you do,
I’ll always be here, I Love You.




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bubbles.. said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 7:39 am:
i cried because this i relate to so well! this is great! i love it!
 
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CaptainFabulousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 7:54 pm:

wow! this is a truly brilliant poem

i really love it

you really have a talent for writing

check out one of my poems sometime?

 
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