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Ambush, Escapade, Desolation (With No Girl Would I Rather Be)

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Time passes by
If this is supposed to help heal my wounds,
it’s failing.

Three weeks now
Was it?
Three weeks or so.

She broke up with me
And then you moved.
She upped and left me
So did you.

What’s worse?
The pain of her absence
Or the fact that yours hurts me less?

You’re my father
What a bother
That we should be closer, and
Get together more.
Charlotte, North Carolina
600 miles away
I’m here in Fowlerville, Michigan.

Fowlerville, Michigan,
One and a half miles away
She’s stuck with me, here to stay

Stuck by me
To trouble me so
With heartache, longing
Crap to my soul.

One and a half miles away
Her heart is still right by mine
Even as she pulls away
I feel this love, still; deep, divine.

Why does she pull?
Why does she pull away?

What is best for us both?
I still yet disagree
That a break-up is what’s best
For her
And me.

What is best for me?
Moving on is more troublesome
Then if I were to just let me be;
Then if I were to just linger,
Melancholy

Your moving should be making this harder.
Barely, Father.

Still, I am drained only by the absence of her touch.
Her hand in mine…
Her lips on mine…
Her willing loving heart, loving so divine

Necessary To me,
Is her breath
Breathing in mine as I breathe in hers, too,
Faces close
Lovers closer
Closer than the beautiful petals to their stem
The stem to his leaves
Or its roots.

“She is essential to my being,”
My happiness is aware
And he also knows that he would not exist
If she were never there.

If she leaves, forever,
Permanently
I’m alone in this world.

Desolate.

Where is she?

What of when she said I was all that could make her happy?
What about when she told me that the thought of life without me
Just made her sick?
What about those times when I felt that she was neglecting me
Only to learn that that thought was pissing her off
Because, in all truth,
She was actually only trying to get me
To follow her off?

Somewhere in some other land
Our brains would always be.
Lovers,
In a great, fun adventure,

With no girl would I rather be.

With no girl would I rather be.



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Mudder_Hacky said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 4:23 pm:

haha well... that could be easily argued ;)

it takes excelling wisdom and maturity to admit that one is unwise and immature.

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 4:24 pm :
haha oops, that wasn't supposed to go here..
 
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remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 4:55 pm:

I like it! I dont usally read long poem like this one but it just drew me in,Im sorry you had to go through that but then again you probally wouldnt be the same person you are today,would you? I dont know.hahah off topic!

anyways amazing poem =)

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 10:13 pm :
:D

tysm!!

it means a lot to me that it hooked you in in spite of its length, especially since i myself understand how many of them can tend to be... well, a little boring, and tedious.

yes, i agree with you that i wouldn't be the same person today. a lot of crap has happened to me in my life, especially regarding this ENTIRE situation, but i have learned and am now.. wiser. and happier! :)
 
remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 8:52 pm :

=)

your welcome.haha yes they can be =)

well God works in weird ways,haha and I bet your probally wayy wiser then I am =) which is always better =D

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 4:23 pm :

haha well... that could be easily argued ;)

it takes excelling wisdom and maturity to admit that one is unwise and immature.

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 4:25 pm :
i, for one, do not have that maturity to admit that i am not mature. i may SAY that i am immature, but to admit it to myself, and accept it... that is something that i admit that i am unable to do.
 
remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 11:12 pm :

hahaha well then,

when you do admit it to yourself i think you should tell me =)

why? I have no idea,it just sounded like the right thing to say XD

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 12:40 pm :
:) i appreciate impulsive action that is taken just because it feels right :D though i don't know why, either..
 
remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 7:41 pm :

haha me too!

haha =D!

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 10:51 am :

hahaXDDDDDD

see? haha, i really am NOT SURE at all where that came from..

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 10:56 am :

wait, quick thought: i was scrolling up and saw your "i think you should tell me" thing, like, telling u when i admit to myself that i am immature..

 

well, i do now, but.. isn't admitting it contradicting the point???

this is all very confuzleing....

 
remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 11:40 am :

hahahaa =D <--I know where that came from XD

uh huh

haha Im not sure...

=)

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 12:25 pm :
from your keyboard? from your brain??
 
remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 11:02 pm :

hahaha both,

and of course my mouth =)

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 3:36 am :
wait, so r u talking about the =D?
 
remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 8:38 am :
I think so?hahaha
 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:11 pm :
hey, thanks for rating this everyday :)
 
remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 9:05 pm :

hahahaha!!

how do u even know its me? ;)

 
Mudder_Hacky replied...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 12:55 pm :

;)

 

b'cawz i'm SMART ;D

 
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