So Much Depends Upon

May 11, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


So much depends
upon
rich reese peanut butter
cups
a taste of heaven
soothing my overloaded mind.

So much depends upon
upon
a light whistling
wind
moving fields of
green
cleansing us anytime
anywhere

So much depends
upon
a light precious flute
notes pouring out
beautifully
music to my
ears

So much depends
upon
bright beautiful green
eyes
giving us a
view
guiding us beautifully
carefully

The author's comments:
This was a class assignment based upon another poem. It was kinda of hard to because we had to keep it in a three word one word format.

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on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:13 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i don't know either is there really a way to write thanks i appreciate it! :P

on Jul. 7 2011 at 6:56 pm
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

i really liked the reeses peanut butter cup one, haha :) they were all powerful, though. i love reading the way you write, i'm not sure what it is, but i love it :)

iheartu SILVER said...
on Jun. 19 2011 at 6:30 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

i esspecially love the one of the reeses peanut butter cup but all of them are great and beautiful

on Jun. 16 2011 at 10:20 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i agree thanks for all the comments on my poems

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:37 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

You have great imagery in your poems, musicispassion. Your poem is true, so much depends on the beauty around us.

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:04 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks for commenting i appreciate it

austenite GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 7:13 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

I keep saying this in all of your poems but I love the imagery in your poems! Beautiful :)


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