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Your
smiles
waves
at me
keep me happy
i don’t know if they will ever come to something
but i still treasure them
i keep them with me
while everyone insults me
they keep me
Sane



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SaphirraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 3:35 pm:
Wow! It's so beautiful!  Your poems are amazing!! :D 
 
Aderes47This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 3:44 pm :
'Blushes and smiles ' Thank you so much!
 
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cookiegirl said...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 1:46 am:
I love you poem, its beautiful and meaningful
 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 4:48 am :
AWW Thanks! 
 
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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 6:21 pm:

I say, yes, it is love.

What makes me so sure is the glowing affection in the poem for the "smiles" and their affect on you. This is a joyful little piece, and I'm glad I came across it.

 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 8:30 pm :

Thanks!:)

I'm pretty sure that the person I am talking about doesn't think of me the way I think of him.

It's unrequited. :(

 
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Jul. 23, 2011 at 10:50 am :
Are you so certain as that?
 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 12:50 pm :
The guy is in his late twenties so yeah.
 
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Christian.a.piperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 6:07 pm:
the love of my universe looks at me like there is the world at end(in a good way) like she wants to cherish every moment we are to gather, and i the same. i bring every hug and kiss with me to keep me sane so i may live another day
 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 12:48 pm :

Uh..Ok.

But that has nothing to do with the poem or is that the way you relate to it?

 
Christian.a.piperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 1:28 pm :
its the way i related to it
 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 3:53 am :

AWWWW

That's very sweet. I think that's one of the cutest and most romantic things I've ever heard. I hope the best for you two. :)

 
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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 11:18 am:
I think there's some grammer in here that's a bit off. I love the idea behind this poem, the meaning and story to it, it's so beautiful and hopeful :)
 
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Jun. 14, 2011 at 11:42 am :
Oh look, here I am talking about 'grammer' and I can't even spell it XD just ignore my grammar correcting, Aderes, don't matter a'tall. :)
 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 7:21 am :
Yeah, I kinda agree with you. But I don't think that grammar matters in poetry. :)
 
IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 8:35 pm :
Good for you :)
 
savetheplanetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 11:22 pm :
Yes it is.  If they are the cane you lean on in the day and the dream you fall asleep to in the night, then it is love.
 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 12:23 am :

AWW

Thank you. 

Because I keep doubting whether it's love or infatuation. 

 
savetheplanetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 12:39 am :
Infatuation you care for their looks and get over them in a month.  With love they have the power to break you, or save you.
 
Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 9, 2011 at 8:51 am :

I guess it's love then. 

But when I think of him, I don't think I love you(because I don't think I'm ready for that, I think of I adore you, I respect you...etc 

 
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