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Life.

May 2, 2011
By Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me


Death should not come easily
It shouldn't be decided
By those who deem better
Than you,
Life should be lived
Freely and unconditionally 
Like love,
Sweet and wholesome 
The journey of life,
Starts before you're born
And the destination of life
Doesn't end at death,
It goes on forever
And forever it will go on,
Believe it or don't
Want it or don't 
But please, I beg,
See and smile
Because life is slowly stopping,
At least just for a while


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on Jul. 23 2011 at 7:19 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Very very pretty! I agree with the other two comments. Keep writing - you a talent!

on Jul. 23 2011 at 7:09 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
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I agree, and also, I really agree with it!!! Very pretty poem!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 7:17 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

This is a truly beautiful poem. I love how positive it is and I love the part at the beginning talking about how you should live your life by what you want to do not how others want you too. this is very good! `"" Thumbs up!

julian GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:46 am
julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
17 articles 17 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.

Wow, this poem packs a lot of punch! It's beautifully written, and it captures our soul's immortality in a gorgeous way. Great job! Definitely deserves 5-stars!