Life.

May 2, 2011
By Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me


Death should not come easily
It shouldn't be decided
By those who deem better
Than you,
Life should be lived
Freely and unconditionally 
Like love,
Sweet and wholesome 
The journey of life,
Starts before you're born
And the destination of life
Doesn't end at death,
It goes on forever
And forever it will go on,
Believe it or don't
Want it or don't 
But please, I beg,
See and smile
Because life is slowly stopping,
At least just for a while


The author's comments:
Hope you like it :)

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on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:39 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks :) means a lot!

on Jul. 27 2011 at 5:26 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I thought this was amazing!!! Very well done, and I agree with the message :)

on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:29 am
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks :)              

austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 9:42 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

This was great! I definitely agree with the message - it made me think about the whole "Circle of Life" thing from The Lion King :) Life has got to be lived, otherwise it will pass you by!  Fantastic job!

on Jul. 26 2011 at 3:11 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

its fine! 4 is still high! thanks :)

on Jul. 26 2011 at 3:11 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks :)                   

on Jul. 26 2011 at 3:09 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks! :)    

on Jul. 26 2011 at 8:10 am
blitsnik SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you must mount the gallows, give a coin to the headman, a jest to the crowd, and meet the drop with a smile on your lips."

I really liked it, especially the part about how life starts before your born and goes on after death. Im not really all that into free verse, so i rated it a 4, but then it sat and stewed in my head, and i kinda regret not giving it a 5. great job!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 5:20 pm
ohmakemeover BRONZE, Centerville, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Touch comes before sight, before speech. It is the first language and the last, and it always tells the truth."- Margaret Atwood

I don't necessaily agree with the message, but I can always appreciate poetry that takes a stance.  Creativity is the perfect way to express your views!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 4:12 pm
NathanBHooker GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Those that care don't matter; and, those that matter don't care."

this was pretty amazing :) 5 stars

on Jul. 25 2011 at 2:06 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks! thats so nice! :)       

on Jul. 25 2011 at 2:06 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks :), means a lot! :)

on Jul. 25 2011 at 2:05 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks :)            

on Jul. 25 2011 at 1:17 pm
TheSilverLaurel GOLD, Goole, Other
13 articles 0 photos 70 comments
this is great, i love how it flows. 5 stars, just a shame i cant put 6

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 11:50 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Very important to live life (strange how so many people don't) and you did a beautiful job. I definately like.

on Jul. 24 2011 at 5:07 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Nice poem!  It is important to realize how beautiful life is and you do a good job conveying that message. :)

on Jul. 24 2011 at 4:49 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

Thanks so much everyone for commenting, it really means a lot! I'm really trying to get this in the magazine so thanks!

Kailey4 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 4:40 pm
Kailey4 BRONZE, Simpsonville, South Carolina
4 articles 3 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Né io pitorre" - Michelangelo

I like how the ending ryhmes (? I think that's how it's spelled:) and also how the message is easy to understand:) GREAT job;)

on Jul. 24 2011 at 1:54 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

great i love it ur a great writer

gigi01 GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:40 pm
gigi01 GOLD, Seffner, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 64 comments
Very beautiful! I like how you compare life to love itself... interesting take on it, but so true! Good message too btw... 5 stars all the way:)


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