Dear Heart, he doesn't like me

I hate how every time he walks by
I have to remind you, my heart,
that it's rude to jump rope in my chest
I mean, it feels like I'm gonna explode
I know I'm a mess
But you're not making it easier for me
Calm down!
He doesn't even like me
Do you want to risk getting broken, my heart
Do you want to risk living in pain for a long time
If you say yes
well, that's coronary suicide
so, let's not take that risk
Love,
Me





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MissDarkCross said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 7:00 pm

Wow. Your good >.<

I wish I was good with poetry, but I'm not.

:3 Lol

 
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 5:44 pm
I love this so much! Sometimes it's hard to take a risk, especially for fear of your heart breaking. I love this, I'll say again. :)
 
.Izzy. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 1:17 pm
I can relate to this sooo much. I seem to always tell my heart that. I love this
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 9:49 pm
This is an amazing poem about how people can be afraid to love again.  Good work!
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 7:57 pm
this is absolutely adorable! i love it! my favorite line is the jump rope one lol :)
 
Delictious said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 7:51 pm
This is my favorite poem you've written yet.. Of the ones I've read. This is sooooo well written! You have a great writing style, and this one really shows it. The line : I have to remind you, my heart, that it's rude to jump rope in my chest.
AMAZING!
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 6:41 pm
:) Dude, every teenage girl needs to read this. Astounding.
 
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