Dear Heart, he doesn't like me

May 7, 2011
By whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then step back and let the world wonder how you did it
and
when life gives you lemon, throw them back at life


I hate how every time he walks by
I have to remind you, my heart,
that it's rude to jump rope in my chest
I mean, it feels like I'm gonna explode
I know I'm a mess
But you're not making it easier for me
Calm down!
He doesn't even like me
Do you want to risk getting broken, my heart
Do you want to risk living in pain for a long time
If you say yes
well, that's coronary suicide
so, let's not take that risk
Love,
Me


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on Jul. 27 2011 at 7:00 pm
DoloresDarling, Cambridge, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Sarah Michelle Gellar- [on the importance of reading] I love books. I\'m constantly afraid we\'re moving into this digital era where books are going to go away, and to me books are the basis to everything in life. Reading is how we function.

Wow. Your good >.<

I wish I was good with poetry, but I'm not.

:3 Lol


on Jul. 18 2011 at 5:44 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I love this so much! Sometimes it's hard to take a risk, especially for fear of your heart breaking. I love this, I'll say again. :)

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on Jul. 18 2011 at 1:17 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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I can relate to this sooo much. I seem to always tell my heart that. I love this

on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:49 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This is an amazing poem about how people can be afraid to love again.  Good work!

on Jul. 17 2011 at 7:57 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

this is absolutely adorable! i love it! my favorite line is the jump rope one lol :)

on Jul. 17 2011 at 7:51 pm
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had."

This is my favorite poem you've written yet.. Of the ones I've read. This is sooooo well written! You have a great writing style, and this one really shows it. The line : I have to remind you, my heart, that it's rude to jump rope in my chest.
AMAZING!

on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:41 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

:) Dude, every teenage girl needs to read this. Astounding.




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