Plain Ordinary Teenage Girl

May 10, 2011
By Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.


I cannot believe that I was naïve enough,
was stupid enough,
to believe that someone might want me,
that you might want me.
A mistake I hope I never make again.
I wanted to believe I meant something to someone.
I wanted to believe I meant something to you,
but I was wrong.
You don’t want me,
I don’t mean anything to you.
I’m just a sad girl with a sad crush,
I’m just a girl, who means nothing,
a girl who is a nobody
a girl who won’t be somebody’s, someone.
Just a plain ordinary teenage girl.


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on Jun. 26 2011 at 11:33 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

Maybe, maybe not.

on Jun. 25 2011 at 3:01 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

Roselynne is too hard to type. Rosie is easy.

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 8:12 pm
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

it's Roselynne thank you very much, not Rosie *glare*

on Jun. 13 2011 at 12:01 am
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

Just wait Rosie.  I'll bombard you with grammatical corrections in our emails.

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 6:48 pm
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

haha...i win :D

on Jun. 12 2011 at 5:19 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

Okay, now you're just taking all the fun out of this. Grr. >:(

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 3:05 pm
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

basically yepp. I don't edit well you know that and I only edit if it's sent directly to me...

on Jun. 12 2011 at 2:39 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

So, you won't let me, even if I give you absolute, total, and irreversible permission to edit my stuff?

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 11:58 pm
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

yeah, changeable, when I send things directly to you but other than that and only poetry it don't gots to be perfect in my opinion

on Jun. 11 2011 at 3:32 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

oh, c'mon.  It'll be fun.  And you're always telling me to edit your stuff.

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 12:17 am
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

no that's fine!!

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 12:19 am
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

sorry, I did do that on purpose

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 12:19 am
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

no you may not changeable, you know how I hate those grammers (and yes I didn't that on purpose!)

on Jun. 9 2011 at 11:05 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

I must say something about missing commas though.  May I?

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 7:29 pm
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

thanks!! :D

on Jun. 8 2011 at 7:12 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

What, do you want me to critique it here?? I did actually like it though.  You should be proud of yourself, dear Roselynne.

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 6:51 pm
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

Suck up...but thanks changeable

on Jun. 8 2011 at 6:48 pm
changeable SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the divine.
-Ludwig van Beethoven

I loved everything about it, even though it was extremely depressing.

on Jun. 8 2011 at 6:14 pm
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)

Aww :( i know how you feel. Great poem.:) I think based on this poem you'd like one of mine titled Holocaust Butterfly check it out if you have time.

Roselynne GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 6:00 pm
Roselynne GOLD, Hillsboro, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you are in the world, you are always looking at the same stars as someone else.

Thanks, it actually did apply to me when I wrote it but thankfully it doesn't any more, it was hard enough before


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