A Sparkling Eye

April 22, 2011
By BPoetry101 SILVER, San Ramon, California
BPoetry101 SILVER, San Ramon, California
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Favorite Quote:
Those who try, try harder than anyone, those who make it, hardly try


Lights, reflections, sound, glimmering off the walls. The chaotic pace of thoughts floating to the air. People talking, whispering, dancing, flying among each other rapidly dancing. The music as if it were in you, making you dance, making you move as if you were drunk but quicker and more precise. The beats ecstatic and loud and pounding in your ears like your heart beat speeding down a road like a race car. Then you see that one girl, that one girl you love, you ask for a dance and when she says yes you go on the dance floor and then the slow song starts and you stare in her eyes and you realize there could be no other girl you could be with. You flow with the slow sound of love, the slow sound like a river flowing soundly by. You smile, you blush, and then you realize things couldn’t get better. Her smile like a radiating light around both of you guides you through the flow of the song, the thought of graciousness we all have in our hearts. Her hair shimmers like that of a heavenly angel lit by the lights but dim and beautiful. Your hands around her waist you flow as if you were meant to be with her. You come closer to her and kiss her and when you look in her eyes this time you see a spark, a glimpse that she loves you to. Then the music starts to slowly die and reality comes back but you still remember that one girl, that one that you will for the rest of your life. Suddenly you realize that it truly was that one girl, the one that you truly love, closely with all your life and you won’t let her go for a long time. Slowly though that memory will die down but there will always be that thought of that night. In the end none should forget it.


The author's comments:
I thought of this after being at a dance and talking to a really sweet girl there.

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on Oct. 17 2011 at 5:52 pm
BPoetry101 SILVER, San Ramon, California
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Favorite Quote:
Those who try, try harder than anyone, those who make it, hardly try

thanks guys again and thank you lieder :)

 


on Sep. 16 2011 at 10:57 pm
LiederMadchen ELITE, Aurora, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
For, I could not love thee, Dear, so much,
Loved I not honour more.
-- Richard Lovelace, quoted often by Baroness Emmuska Orczy in The Scarlet Pimpernel

This is beautiful! I love your use of words and how they paint such a lovely picture. :)

on Sep. 12 2011 at 7:32 pm
AlwaysRememberToSmile, Morrill, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it\'s about learning to dance in the rain.\"

anytime :)

on Sep. 10 2011 at 5:27 pm
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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As long as you post one!!! Tell me when you do!

on Sep. 10 2011 at 1:30 pm
BPoetry101 SILVER, San Ramon, California
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Favorite Quote:
Those who try, try harder than anyone, those who make it, hardly try

Thanx! And yeh I was thinking of writing a sequel but it might take a while thanks for the comments guys I appreciate it :)

on Sep. 9 2011 at 10:41 pm
AlwaysRememberToSmile, Morrill, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it\'s about learning to dance in the rain.\"

So I'm pretty sure that this is the single sweetest thing I have ever read written by a guy. It is absolutly amazing (:

on Sep. 9 2011 at 6:56 pm
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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OMG!!! Right a sequel... Simply Perfect


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