Tell Me to Stay

April 5, 2011
By bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.


If i told you i loved you and walked away
could you still live your life from day to day
knowing that nothing could remain the same
because we were arguing and I'm to blame,
and now fading is the memory of our first kiss
but your love is something that I'll always miss
so if i told you i loved you and tried to walk away
would you hold me close and tell me to stay.



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on Jun. 7 2013 at 12:47 pm
Court901 BRONZE, Magnolia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagniation is not a talent of some people, but it is the health of every person" -Ralph Waldo Emerson

Your rhymes aren't cheesy and I like that. I hate it when the ryming words don't really fit into the poem but are there to make it sound the same. Good job.

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on Jun. 6 2013 at 7:51 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

amennnn.:/

bree_bree GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2013 at 5:26 pm
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.

Aww thanks XD the insperation behind it is kinda sad though, brekups are always hurtful.

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 5 2013 at 5:20 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

wow! short but soo meaningful. this is really gorgeous

on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:05 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow! Beautiful! You earn 5 stars:) Great job. It flowed perfectly bree_bree!

bree_bree GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 3:51 pm
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.

thanks i try to make them universal hope it worked out ok

on Jun. 11 2011 at 4:02 pm
CieraDesiree GOLD, Hagerstown, Indiana
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An eye for an eye only makes the whole world blind.
You never know what you have until it's gone.

This is cute(:


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