Tell Me to Stay

April 5, 2011
If i told you i loved you and walked away
could you still live your life from day to day
knowing that nothing could remain the same
because we were arguing and I'm to blame,
and now fading is the memory of our first kiss
but your love is something that I'll always miss
so if i told you i loved you and tried to walk away
would you hold me close and tell me to stay.

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Court901 said...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 12:47 pm
Your rhymes aren't cheesy and I like that. I hate it when the ryming words don't really fit into the poem but are there to make it sound the same. Good job.
sarah98 said...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 5:20 pm
wow! short but soo meaningful. this is really gorgeous
bree_bree replied...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 5:26 pm
Aww thanks XD the insperation behind it is kinda sad though, brekups are always hurtful.
sarah98 replied...
Jun. 6, 2013 at 7:51 pm
CieraDesiree said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 4:02 pm
This is cute(:
bree_bree replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 3:51 pm
thanks i try to make them universal hope it worked out ok
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:05 am
Wow! Beautiful! You earn 5 stars:) Great job. It flowed perfectly bree_bree!
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