You ignore me

April 20, 2011
By Debbie1 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
Debbie1 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is life, there is hope."


Can you hear me...
Or do you choose not to listen?
Can you see me...
Or do you choose not to look?
Can you feel me...feel my pain...
Or do you choose to ignore it?

Can you see the pieces of my broken heart?
Did you hear when it shattered?
Did you feel it too?

Did you hear my cries...my cries of pain?
Did you see my tears?
Did you feel me... feel my pain...
Or did you choose to ignore me?

I'm shouting!
Listen! Listen to my cries of pain!
Won't you listen?!

I'm crying!
Look! Can't you see my tears?!
Can't you see my pain?!
Won't you look at me?!

I'm hurting!
Feel it! Feel it, so you can know my pain... so you can feel my pain.

But you ignore everything.
You ignore me.



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on Apr. 18 2012 at 2:45 pm
Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else."
"we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through"
“Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.”

I do like this poem :) you should write new lines to explain maybe the story behind it.

Debbie1 SILVER said...
on May. 20 2011 at 7:24 pm
Debbie1 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is life, there is hope."

I really hope you all like this poem


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