Fall Falcon

April 18, 2011
Watch as the falcon falls,
falls from the far away sky.
Watch as the falcon falls to the ground,
where wings do not belong.

Stare as the falcon falls,
far to the ground,
where the falling falcon is bound,
no better than a man.

Watch as the falcon falls,
and breathes a mortal's breath.
Fall falcon,

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DanniTwin502 said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 6:51 pm
I agree with Smile, it's very thought provoking!
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 21, 2011 at 6:01 pm
Compelling. Thought-provoking. And complexity within the short poem. i really liked it. Any poem that gets a reader on the edge of their seat waiting for the next line deserves to be noticed. Very well done :)
maki_rain replied...
May 24, 2011 at 4:37 pm
Thank you so much!
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